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Like: 

• collage the most 
• paper cut-outs with minimal colours and shapes
• continuous line drawings are interesting
• bottles, simple forms work well
• colours!
• patterns exploring line and shape
• expressing her music and passion through colour and shape and her process through line and layers

Advice:

• could I overlay prints
• need to deactivate the content by further layering
• studies need to scream analogue process
• apply her ideology and chose things that are more focussed that make sounds (use her idea)
• look at touching elbows prints (2 practitioners printing on top of each other)
• could translate really well to screen printing

Summatively:

• Need to take apart different pieces and rearrange them
• Collage in an abstract way with drawings and prints
• Deconstruct the image by pulling different motifs together